trickster 0 Posted April 23, 2003 Share Posted April 23, 2003 Here's my haiku: ==================== "The blue sky is great It looks nice and is pretty too And I like snow too" ==================== Pretty talented, don't you think? I challenge you all to surpass that! Link to post Share on other sites
mikazooki 0 Posted April 23, 2003 Share Posted April 23, 2003 aah, but the real challenge is haiku is 5 letters 7 letters 5 letters, as i'm sure u will relate to a japanese letter (hiragana symbol) being a syllable (including ん)- and hence the usual english translation as syllables. but the purists will yearn for something more genuine... carot potatou vegie Link to post Share on other sites
grungy-gonads 54 Posted April 23, 2003 Share Posted April 23, 2003 The words makes for a more interesting challenge and surely the more realistic "translation" of the meaning. No? Hmm. Anyway, here's mine: Snowboarders have their one plank Skiers like their two planks and sticks They are all good friends Do I win? Link to post Share on other sites
proudtobegay 0 Posted April 23, 2003 Share Posted April 23, 2003 "I met a guy yesterday With muscles as big as tree trunks He was most definitely yummy" Link to post Share on other sites
mikazooki 0 Posted April 23, 2003 Share Posted April 23, 2003 sorry, i was having a lark with the letters business, but really haiku is generally accepted as consisting of 17 syllables not words...please try harder. much of the aesthetic beauty comes from the conciseness and rhythym Link to post Share on other sites
enderzero 0 Posted April 23, 2003 Share Posted April 23, 2003 Akiyama, Akiyama-desu yoroshiku, yoroshiku, Akiyama-desu vote for Akiyama Link to post Share on other sites
mikazooki 0 Posted April 23, 2003 Share Posted April 23, 2003 now thats beautiful!!! will u read it to me while i sleep, ender ? Link to post Share on other sites
Wizz 11 Posted April 24, 2003 Share Posted April 24, 2003 Hokkaido, Iwate, Aomori, are good. And Yamagata, Niigata, Fukushima and Tochigi too. They are all really nice. Can I start a sentence with "And"? I was always taught at school that was really bad. Link to post Share on other sites
Yuki's Passion 1 Posted April 24, 2003 Share Posted April 24, 2003 A Hokkaido dream, It lasted for just four months, Has melted away I need a fix, anybody know where a junkie can get a quick hook-up of some crack powder??? Need snow, smelting away... Link to post Share on other sites
peterson 0 Posted April 29, 2003 Share Posted April 29, 2003 The winter has finished and Now it is spring and soon it Will be a sticky summer Link to post Share on other sites
slimeypete 0 Posted April 30, 2003 Share Posted April 30, 2003 Military people are all heroes Hurrah Hurrah, I think they deserve to To get more cash for-it. Link to post Share on other sites
cheeseman 1 Posted May 1, 2003 Share Posted May 1, 2003 There are lots of cheeses Cheddar, Edam, Leicester, Gouda, smelly French stuff Everyone loves cheese, oh yeah Link to post Share on other sites
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