dizzy 0 Posted March 13, 2008 Share Posted March 13, 2008 haiku has 3 lines of 5, 7, and 5 syllables. in japanese, there's usually a "season" word in the first line telling you which of the five seasons it is, which i ignore. backcountry magazine has one in every issue. Cool crisp winter air I spent the day on my butt First time snowboarding Take off your bindings Surf not waves but powder snow! Say Yes to the No Good friends good weather We wear smiles turn after turn What else do you need? Link to post Share on other sites
Kumapix 0 Posted March 13, 2008 Share Posted March 13, 2008 I'm not sure if the word 'butt' really fits in this poem Link to post Share on other sites
JA2340 16 Posted March 13, 2008 Share Posted March 13, 2008 Would ASS be better? Link to post Share on other sites
dizzy 0 Posted March 13, 2008 Author Share Posted March 13, 2008 butt or ass perfectly fits. well, at least that's what i hear about a lot of people's first day out Link to post Share on other sites
SnowJapan Admin SnowJapan 178 Posted March 13, 2008 SnowJapan Admin Share Posted March 13, 2008 (Last few posts deleted) Can we keep the 'sex haiku' off here please. That sort of stuff does not belong here. Thank you. Link to post Share on other sites
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